The Cherry Trees

in that shinjuku lane
an old sakura tree
stands in my mind
grandma with her
bare hair



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The Cherry Trees
The cherry trees bend over and are shedding,
On the old road where all that passed are dead,
Their petals, strewing the grass as for a wedding
This early May morn when there is none to wed.
Edward Thomas

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Raynette Eitel 25 August 2005

Matthew must have visited too many Hallmark shops. I like it the way it is. Raynette

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Matthew Pearson 25 August 2005

The only thing which spoiled my enjoyment was the last two words. I kept thinking of 'Care Bear'. If you went for a less clumsy last line, this could have made it as an endearing little piece.

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