The Climb Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

The Climb



There is so much to see
At the end of the road
A new landscape
A new vista
A new perspective
A new sight to dazzle our eyes
Yet we can only see them
When we dare to walk that road
To see for ourselves what it has to offer
To experience the thrill it gives
As we travel along its many bends and curves
Each road we take can lead to another road
Every crossings lead to another direction
Life offers many road for us to walk on
And each road we take are different from the other
Sometimes we find ourselves walking on a grassy road
Other times we travel on a hilly road
And still at other times we traverse a road
That we never dream of traversing
As they are slopy and steep to walk on
Some roads we have to climb to reach their end
Which is ardous and full of risk
But it is only in climbing them that we will see
The beauty lying behind those roads
They are waiting to be discovered and explored
The richness they offer remain hidden from our eyes
Until we dare to venture into them
The climb of our life remains a dream
Till we take the first step towards the top

Saturday, September 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: paths
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 October 2018

(cont.) i DO feel the poem may be a bit too optimistic. i feel not all are able to travel the roads which will lead them to beauty, success, and/or happiness. Some are hampered by poor health, poor education (or the wrong education) , family and other personal problems. but for some, this poem could be very useful, though a bit 'vague' in its suggestions. ;) :) bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 14 October 2018

i'm liking it so far. Every crossings lead to another direction...i'd use crossing leads ;) then many roads, not road. road we take are different..is They are waiting... i think It is waiting, referring to beauty. etc. but i still like the poem very much, despite some English irregularities (to my eyes) . to MyPoemList. (cont.)

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