Sunday, January 31, 2016

The Clouded Mind Comments

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"Alright class, open to page 32 and let's begin chapter 7 lesson 2,
Cell reproduction is a process that begins when one cell decides that it must become two."
The words drone on and lull to sleep.
The message of lessons sink slowly into the deep.
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Kyle Rasmussen
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Khairul Ahsan 20 March 2016

Read this poem of yours-it's beautiful! The title of the poem is appropriate and the stanzas of the poem perfectly describe how a mind is clouded in the classrooms: But the future isn't now, And a mind in a cloud Will never see sun to brighten and wow. - So well said!

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Soul Watcher 01 February 2016

This poem was the first poem I read when I visited the site today, and it was a good start. Thank you for sharing

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