Wednesday, November 30, 2011

The Cold Old Forest Comments

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Snowflakes softly falling, falling
Wind and wolves calling, calling
Pine trees pointing soaring, soaring
Brown bears snoozing snoring, snoring
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Dean Meredith
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Smoky Hoss 03 December 2011

Oh, I like this... the repetition gives it a flow, as if we are riding a breeze into your wooded world that you are sharing with us. Very nice.

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