The Cold Tears Poem by Raees Ahmad

The Cold Tears

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Once i met a Belle, on social media.
Her eyes were like Almond
And she was from far area.
Her face was a shining diamond.
She used to call me daily,
As I falled deep in her love.
She was very far from my valley.
I wish she could fly, to me as a dove.
But she left me in cold tears,
Because I was watching a dream.
And some one whispered into my ears,
As I woke up find my lamps gleam,
Shining but suddenly got off.
And I wipe my cold tears and doff.

Friday, December 15, 2017
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For my disloyal beloved
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 March 2018

Word of an active imagination embellished in Shakespearean rhyme scheme. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Raees and do remain enriched.

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Rini Shibu 15 December 2017

Heartfelt sad poem Raees.. Well penned

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