** The Cold Wind ** Poem by swagathnath rajeswari

** The Cold Wind **

Rating: 3.1


The wavy wind strikes the leaves
and the leaves are blowing up and down!
and it was seen by me
and wary winds see me
I am so happy of that!

At the time
I`m enclosed by shouter
and also the wind was going near by ear
chilled and speak in my ear how are yu?
At morning 7`O clock I am awake
my head is held down where my body stretch
and raise how nice to be there in the cold wind
speaking into the ear asking me how are you?
Speechless and enjoyed the morning
and asked the wind are you coming the next morning?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a lovely poem..keep going

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acharya gopinath 09 March 2009

A good write for a young child. Really find good. Keep it up. I do put full marks for you dear poet.

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