**heavenly Night** Poem by swagathnath rajeswari

**heavenly Night**

Rating: 2.7


In the milky night
the diamond moon glistens on
the silver lakes reflects
the power of twinkling stars! !

The smell of jasmine which
maketh the insects sit upon
the breezy wind peeps into my ear
to wakeup at the milky night alone
is wonderful and charm! !

The golden leaves falls from the tree
looks as going in the chilly air
as angels flies in the moon lit night! !

The melodies of trees chirping sounds of air
call me remembering the sound of salangai
worn by woman! !
The night birds sing the songs I am delighted
enjoyed standing in the chilly air beneath the moon lit night! !

Let the heavenly night wake me up
And I am delighted to stand under the moon lit night! ! !

(Salangai woman wear in their legs which gives beautiful sound
10/3/2009 1000 pm)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 28 March 2009

Yes. This is a very nice description of a Heavenly Night. This writing delivers on its promise to the reader. I love that. GW62

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it's cool! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! keep it up!

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Aiswarya. T.anish 27 March 2009

Beautiful description. I love the first four lines. Keep writing.

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Martine Kolber 24 March 2009

I agree, I could picture it in my mind; good write! ! Take care, Martine

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you have really very well captured ur momentary experience in really butiful wrds...thnx for sharing

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