Christian Eliab Ratnam

Rookie (27th March 1990 / Singapore)

The Creator - Poem by Christian Eliab Ratnam

I used to enjoy my walks in the forest,
Among the lush greenery there,
Until I doubted the Maker of the leaves
And the fowls in the air.

I interviewed the birds,
Which just whistled at God’s wonder.
And looked at the leaves,
Which did proclaim their Designer.

Yet I doubted His glory,
And His divine authority,
Until I pondered again on the verdure,
Which made my vision clearer.

Now I delight in my walks in the forest,
Among the lush greenery there,
While I proclaim my great Maker,
And whistle with the fowls in the air!

Copyright © Christian Ratnam 2007

Comments about The Creator by Christian Eliab Ratnam

  • Joe Breunig (7/20/2006 9:12:00 PM)

    Nice write; loved how you tied the last stanza back to the first one, while showing personal growth. Well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 23, 2005

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 15, 2007

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