The Voice Of My Saviour Poem by Christian Eliab Ratnam

The Voice Of My Saviour

Rating: 4.4


Through the mist of my heart,
I heard a voice,
A sweet, melodious voice
That affirmed the words
Of my long awaited joy.

And through that mist,
A song I heard
That made my tear drops sweet.
A wonderful song that filled my heart,
With the expiation of my guilt.

That mist of sin,
My soul foretold
With repugnance deep within.
That song of peace that voice restored
Amidst a heart of hatred and discord.

That ineffable voice,
My state made known,
That ineluctable state I was in,
Until I inclined my heart unto that voice
That purged my heart of sin.

That voice of old,
Which cleansed my heart,
Is still ringing in my ear.
The voice of my Saviour which said “I love you! ”,
Will stay within me forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 09 December 2015

A beautiful religious and devotional muse. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2015

That ineffable voice! The voice of life. Nice work.

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Kim Barney 09 December 2015

Very well done. Far too few people are hearing that voice today, and there is nothing more important.

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M Asim Nehal 09 December 2015

And this voice is heard by the lover....10

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Chinedu Dike 30 October 2019

A fine and lofty verse ceremoniously rich in tone. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing. Remain enriched.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 August 2022

A refined poem about your belief in The Saviour, our God. Too few young poets write such Tributes, and this makes me very very sad. I do hope that you still have that belief and love in the Saviour.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 August 2022

5 Stars TOP score for this Classic Poem Of The Day. WOW! 17 tears later PH chose this poem as The Classic Poem Of The Day

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