The Day I Almost Died Poem by Carmael William

The Day I Almost Died

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It was pouring, nightfall o'er the wet streets,
On a bike we rode, hurry to go home
The road was muddy, street lights hazy, blind
Pitch black all around where our eyes would meet
A sudden break! Crashed and skid over a stone
Numb mind...

My hands and legs were grazed, me prostrated,
The tire over my left leg, silhouette outlined;
People rushing o'er as the wide moon shone,
My jeans and shirt had been torn, and naked
I pined..

Friday, November 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: accident,nightfall
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lee Boueri 27 November 2020

Thats a nice use of imagery. It took me to a younger time. Thank you for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 November 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Sophia William. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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