The Dead Drunk I Help Poem by Pheko Motaung

The Dead Drunk I Help



The dead drunk I help
In their inimitable
Way they thank me very
Profusely and fart in my
Love all of humanity face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 20 April 2016

Not by any means an expert on the form, but I think the third and fifth lines are both one syllable too many. Other than that, it is a great tanka

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