The Dead Soil Poem by Malaya Roses

The Dead Soil

Rating: 2.8


Turn to the peak point of solstice
Feel the wind
Touch the sun
On head to toe
The shadow is under the sole.

Green or dry
It might be a season’s park upon faulty smiles
In our land
We kill the soil.

Now naked
We were undressed by more ambition than blood
Red flushes fast
Stripped at the hall of foolishness
Still our blatant greed never satisfied.

Friday, July 8, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luz Hanaii 07 February 2017

Your writing is a deep and beautiful as always

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 July 2011

Praising too much would be flattery. I just want to say that the poem was outstanding written well with nice texture and imagery. Kudos to you. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Our Indian politicians' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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