The Decieved Poem by Bridgid Patrick

The Decieved

Rating: 3.2


I hate you for leaving
I hate you for decieving
I loved you too much.
I feel like i cant breathe when i think of you
you were so perfect in my eyes.
i had no bad words to say about you.
You were my world,
You were my everything
now i feel empty
now i feel numb
my emotions are gone
im highly strung
my inspirations been lost.
love can be a curse
this poems doesnt even rhyme
i aint got the time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ***** 21 April 2005

Well Bridgid, there is absolutely no need for rhyme to make a poem a success, smile, Sx

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