The Diapason Of My Feelings Poem by Liza Sud

The Diapason Of My Feelings

The diapason of my feelings
to you - is broad.
It Includes everyhing: from visions
to entering the shock.

To become close - we don't need it.
Do not haras!
But anyway it goes I'll see you -
as sinner sees - a paradise.

You cannot bring me pain or harm me.
Cause pain is fear.
There is no fear of those who are free.
themselves - as wind.

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Диапазон моих к Вам отношений
весьма широк.
Включает все в себя он: от видений
до входа в шок.

нам не надо быть ближе.
Не приставай!
я все равно тебя увижу -
как грешник - рай.

И ты не причинишь мне боли.
боль-это страх.
нет страха над тем, кто волен.
и ветер - сам.

Friday, April 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 30 April 2016

This poem confronts a crisis but ends with an affirmation of FREEDOM compared to that freest of natural forces - the wind. And I can see that FREEDOM is the inner strength that is wrapped around the whole poem. On a second reading we can see the speaker is not helpless before temptation because that virtue FREEDOM is within her, it is already operating to safeguard her. In the second stanza she acknowledges temptation promises a kind of paradise (which is a good thing narrowly defined) but it would cause the loss of a greater Paradise (this is not stated but is, as I read the poem, implied) . We are not told about the consequences of her resiostance to temptation, but other poems in this series of poems from late April suggest a positive outcome.

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