Monday, September 24, 2007

The Dilemma Comments

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I don't care anymore, I cant lie to you now.
I suffer from a bad affection
seems my life's a contra diction,
two live war inside of me.
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Mary Wismer
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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 November 2007

still the dichotomy of thoughts- to be or not to be -cutting the edges in desire to love cr not to love that lie latching on to the saga of staked emotion yet not contradicted, quite unique penning and i love lines, thanks for sharing

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Rommel Filoteo 27 September 2007

Such an emotional poem... A dilemma you can say but for me it just all the same, we're only human to commit mistake, anyway nobodys perfect. The only solution to this dilemma is being honest to your self & to the one you care for. A mistake is always be a mistake unless that we correct it. Just a comment- God bless! Rommel

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Marc Mannheimer 24 September 2007

Nice poem - I wish I could understand German (or Swiss?) and then read it in that language. I think I am in the same dilemma now, and so are many others!

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