The Door Poem by Manie Sha

The Door

Rating: 4.3


I am standing outside the door of happiness
but it is closed, locked, covered with spider web
No more sound of coughing and laughing,
No more fragrance of love and food,
No more excitement, everything is vanished!

I asked myself...'where has the love gone'? ?
Or was God too blind to see it! !

As soon as i touched the door
a flash of beautiful memories crossed my mind
A tear in my eye reminding me the pain
when the door said me goodbye!

Standing outside the door
wishing everything to just come back
Tears may dry up
but my heart will never dry!

But i realized that life has it own way of teaching
and explained my
'maybe this door is closed today, Because some other beautiful door is waiting for me'
And i tried to move on!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 12 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Manie S. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ashutosh Dubey 22 March 2012

really it gives me a gr8 pleasure to read ur poems..........m very happy that what i cant do u r able to join the words in a beautiful rhythm n bring out a meaning out of it.........going thru ur poems give me a pseudo thought that i m living my desire life.........hope u to continue this way n let us entertain the literature with ur poems........m really proud of u dear.........m getting a print out of ur poems n pasting them on my door.......good luck........ashutosh dubey.....

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ijlal Haider 12 March 2012

very nice.... i can visualize your words....

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