The Door Poem by Mieke Mask

The Door

Rating: 3.5


Are you afraid to say that you love me?
why won't you say how you feel?
Why won't you say what you think?
I'm the one who's insecure, but i'm open, your door is closed
I want to break the wall and see your fears
fight them all and catch your tears...

Monday, July 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,relationship,struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 July 2015

A well articulated love poem nicely penned with insight. Many people experiencing the spiritual effects of love, prefer to trend slowly bearing in mind the catastrophic effects of heartbreak. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 13 July 2015

A very nice poem, Mieke. Thanks for sharing

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