Thursday, February 16, 2006

The Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

PART ONE

‘Twas down the street one gloomy night,
A lovely chill of air;
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Jonathan Howard 16 February 2006

Thank you! I used Coleridge as inspiration (partly) , and about 10 reviewers for it. Every word was checked, every caesura and syllable. Refined to mean what I want; thanks to them all.

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Gina Onyemaechi 16 February 2006

I've loved every second of this, Jonathan. You've held me from start to finish. I love the plot, the Biblical language, the drama, everything. Power to you, Jonathan, power to you. Full marks. Regards, Gina.

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