Thursday, July 3, 2008

The Empty Room Comments

Rating: 3.3

I see the light fade
in your sea greens
as you ponder
unknown troubles
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Viola Grey
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Existential Despair 20 August 2008

A nice play of words in this lovely work...i'm torn between celebrating the genius of this piece and grieving sad atmosphere it radiates

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Greenwolfe 1962 05 July 2008

Makes me want to take off my sea greens and pot on a robe and sit by a warm fire. GW62

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Kevin Wells 03 July 2008

Love your imagery...love your way with words. Who else would write a line like 'I see the light fade in your sea greens...' Great!

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Ency Bearis 03 July 2008

a desperate verses from a woman on emptiness...wonderful write.. very good to read. Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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