Tuesday, August 1, 2017

The Encaged Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waking up every day to the switched-on lamp
Her eyelids barred, her dreams unbarred.
Casketing her emotions aside safely,
Wiping the black teary eyes herself,
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Fatima Farooq
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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 04 August 2017

Good start

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Ezhil Vendhan 03 August 2017

Fatima, it is beautiful. She felt the city as free as a bird, She was timid, and what else could she be? She thought it was beautiful, And how bad could it be?

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Samantha Jones 02 August 2017

What a sad piece of poetry regarding a woman's life. Made me cry.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Fatima. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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M Ali 01 August 2017

Well done.... Show the power of your thinking.to the whole world

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 August 2017

How could she do that? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Fatima Farooq

Fatima Farooq

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