Goodbye is wat i should say
But i dont see no 'good' part
Will u desert me?
What am i goin to survive on?
Starving for your love
And yearning for your touch
Please dont let me go
I've been strong this whole time
But im afraid i might break
My insides are about to explode
And be revealed to the world
Im like a bomb ticking
Waiting to go off
I dont wanna show weak
So dont make me
Sometimes the person
Who makes you the strongest
Is your weakness....
''goodbye is what i should say but i dont see no good part'' great way to catch the readers attention from the start. but top to bottom another great poem.
this poem is very true, it's a very wonderful heart wrenching poem, so much pain you put into this poem, it was utterly beautiful.~Hazel G.E
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Another great write but it reads as if you expect to fail and depresses me on behalf of the girl.