I sewed my heart back together
Because it had frayed
I was drowning
While u were floatin
U were a fraud
But i couldnt see beneath
Ur suface
So mabey its my fault
U contained me
And n contact
We seemed to be unpenetrable
Descending into my grave
I curse those words
'i love you is eight letters so is Bullsh*t'
Pleeze however u kill me
It will be less painful than this
Put a gun to my head
And do the old BANG BANG!
Or put a blade to my wrist
And make me enjoy it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Suffocate me til i dont wanna breath no more......
Emotional piece, thanks for sharing your feelings with us 10 Lyndax
A sharing and emotional piece that no doubt many will relate to.
It's easy to see that you had to be there to show the feeling of giving up. Glad you know that your not alone so that we can share it with you.
wow another great piece. i loved the way you began and ended this piece. but overall top to bottom very nice
the emotion shows... well written, the emotion is deep... ~Kerli
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice emotions shown in the poem..really hurtful..