The Fights! ! ! ! ! Poem by Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl

The Fights! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.6


Poundin
Poundin
Poundin
in my ear
Fire burnin endelessly
Flaring n getting close enuff to burn through me
The light blindin n blarin on my sight
Sweat taintin my face n blood stainin
the winner the one who can hold longer
to reign all show no fear
But instead let the fear suffocate itself inside you
Rottin n killin ur core

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like how you kept with the theme throughout. It was really strong, and I could feel it in every line of your poem, and that's not easy to do. Nice work!

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