Sunday, June 26, 2011

The Factory Comments

Rating: 5.0

The smell of the factory is exquisite.
The machine rolls on,
infinite.
The clamor of steel,
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bill nye the science guy
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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