Wednesday, May 14, 2014

The Female Psyche (Revised) Comments

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I’m too heavy to ride the flimsy new wooden
chairs forwards with a bang you pointed out;
knowing its true angered then saddened me,
hating you, though I preach forgiveness and
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Margaret Alice Second
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Susan Lacovara 14 May 2014

Do not let criticism from others be the true weight that you carry...I think there is nothing more beautiful than an obese heart! Your poem speaks to everyone who has been hard on themselves and has been the victim of hard words. Quite simply, be your own kinda beautiful. PEACE

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James Mclain 14 May 2014

Steady, strong and true each and every poem that you write is enjoyed by all I know it's true.....iip

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