Tuesday, June 9, 2015

The Final Cast Comments

Rating: 4.5

It doesn't matter whether, the weather's foul or fine,
What better way to spend the day than with a rod and line,
You'll need the patience of a Saint and a wiggly worm for bait,
Then sit and stare at the float out there,
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Brian Barnett
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Chinedu Dike 09 June 2015

Very metaphorical piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with nice rhyme scheme. Death is a bad reaper often going after unripe fruits, but then we must always remember that DUST TO DUST IS A MUST. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Kelly Kurt 09 June 2015

A lively tribute for your brother, Brian. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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