Saturday, July 18, 2015

The Fire Within Comments

Rating: 4.8

You think that I'm young
And think that i'M weak
But inside me there's a spark
That flicker's down deep
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Bhavyakeerti Bohrey
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2016

It's not always soothing, you know It changes with your feelings It can turn from a small, helping candle flame To a forest fire that damages beyond the power of healing. a fire deep within........ this is the real experience of a poet or poetess in love......... love, expressions, poetic quality that goes deep into the innermost recesses of the soullllllll. a nice poem. love reading you. tony

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Chinedu Dike 25 July 2015

An insightful, well articulated and nicely penned piece of poetry with good rhyme scheme. I concur with the conviction of the poem - keeping faith while taking things and situations in stride, will certainly lead one from darkest nights into the light of a new dawn. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 18 July 2015

Just look forward, keep your head high Because it's always darkest before the dawn. a good advice for sure ;) thanks for sharing, Bhavyakeerti and.. welcome at Poem Hunter

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Thank you for the complements and the heartwarming welcome, Mr. Frosini :)

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