The Fire Within Poem by Bhavyakeerti Bohrey

The Fire Within

Rating: 4.8


You think that I'm young
And think that i'M weak
But inside me there's a spark
That flicker's down deep

You say that I'm nothing
Oh, don't you dare
For in my heart the mark of power
I do bare

I may be the freak
The girl inside her dreams
But I'm not as fragile
Not as calm as I seem

For inside me there's a tiny flame
That glows soft and steady
It tells me that I'm not to blame
And for challenges keeps me ready

Because I believe,
That I can stand up to the world
I'm the one who can change
I can make seas rise with just my word
I'm the one who can rearrange

When I look out my window
The other girls I see
Snickering and mocking
Staring up at me

They think I must be breaking
Deep inside my soul
When they really have no idea
Of the humor all this hold

And when I walk down the pathway
I hold y head up high
And keep myself from smiling
At the averted eyes of passersby

What's wrong with you now?
Don't I seem funny enough?
Or are you intimidated in person?
If so, well, that's rough.

I know that you can also see
The Flames that are inside
The ones as bright as the blazing sun
And in my soul they reside

I really don't wanna intimidate you
Or make you feel like a weakling
Come with me, don't be shy
Come on! I'll tell you a secret thing

You see, the fire that I talk about
It's not like it's just in me
Sit down, take a deep breath
And in your heart you'll see.

A shining ball of soothing light
That burns in the deepest part
It's the thing keeps you going
It's what makes us a lionheart.

It's not always soothing, you know
It changes with your feelings
It can turn from a small, helping candle flame
To a forest fire that damages beyond the power of healing.

When you're happy it will burn
Like a sparkle of dancing light
When you're sad it will turn
To a small glow of controlled might

Your anger will act
Like the fuel to the flame
But only when you're confident
It will become tame

So my advice to you is simple
Keep your head cool and calm
And you'll be able to control the world
Like you're holding it in your palm

If something bad comes around
Accept it! Let things go on!
Just look forward, keep your head high
Because it's always darkest before the dawn.

Saturday, July 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: confidence,fire,power,self discovery,self reflection ,soul,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2016

It's not always soothing, you know It changes with your feelings It can turn from a small, helping candle flame To a forest fire that damages beyond the power of healing. a fire deep within........ this is the real experience of a poet or poetess in love......... love, expressions, poetic quality that goes deep into the innermost recesses of the soullllllll. a nice poem. love reading you. tony

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Chinedu Dike 25 July 2015

An insightful, well articulated and nicely penned piece of poetry with good rhyme scheme. I concur with the conviction of the poem - keeping faith while taking things and situations in stride, will certainly lead one from darkest nights into the light of a new dawn. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 18 July 2015

Just look forward, keep your head high Because it's always darkest before the dawn. a good advice for sure ;) thanks for sharing, Bhavyakeerti and.. welcome at Poem Hunter

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Thank you for the complements and the heartwarming welcome, Mr. Frosini :)

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