Sunday, May 15, 2005

The First Time Comments

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I came to you in soft colours,
delicate hues of morning flowers
shyly opening to the sun.
I pressed against your lips,
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Janine Campbell
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Niealie Petit 27 May 2015

Your words capture such an experience with such grace and beauty. I applaud your work.

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2015

Beautiful romantic piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned from the heart. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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