The Frenzied Mind Poem by Nayanthara Rajeev

The Frenzied Mind

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There I see a boat
Sailing in the vicious sea
Yes, the vicious sea
I know you are merciless
Merciless enough to leave your boat alone
You say you are kind and honest
But you left your boat alone
There it goes quivering
The waves make it tremble
But they are honest
Honest for their yearning
But I fear u lose your boat
The boat may sacrifice
And may make you surrender
For the passion of the waves
Do not shatter for it is your destiny
All I say is turn back and smile
There you can see the cape of your lived days

Monday, May 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 26 May 2015

I like your style, Nayanthara. Peace

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Rakesh Kalia 26 May 2015

A good attempt to catch the conflict between conscious and subconscious yet a feeling of dejavu remains after going through it.

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