The Full Emptiness Poem by Joran Tibor De Jong

The Full Emptiness

Rating: 3.0


Careless I'm standing in the rain,
Drowned in my mind,
But it doesn't matter.
I'm empty,
Yet so full.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 24 November 2013

a bit too cryptic for me to understand, but i like it. and the grammar and punctuation seems fine, which is a relief to me! thanks for sharing. :)

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