The Gaol Of Time Poem by Muhammad Shahab

The Gaol Of Time

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The blue ocean beneath,
And above in the air,
The creatures;
The one that walks,
The one that soars,
The one that dives,
All and sundry in a toil
Incessant,
To outlive the other.

Tell me…
Who will remain?
Who will triumph
The battle against time?
Our white hope like daisies
Exudes from a vacant arena
Full of the all-and-sundry.
Only in a gaol
Of time and its tricks.

Thursday, March 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,time,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 30 March 2019

Here in the United States of America we use the word JAIL instead of the British word GAOL, so I had to think for a moment to remember what a gaol was. A fascinating first poem. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 March 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Muhammad Shahab. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thanks

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 March 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Muhammad Shahab. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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