The Garden Beyond. Poem by ritty patnaik
The Garden Beyond.
cascading water
of a mini waterfall,
giggles over the slope,
unmanageable,
pouring into a dry creek,
edged with
sweeping swath of grass!
the flowering, bottle brush,
attracts honeysuckel and bees,
nestled out door living
showing, a miniature world,
outside my window.
nature blooms with kindness!
This is picturesque ritty. I like 'giggles' over the slope and the descriptive words for your miniature world. It sounds very lovely. 10 love Karin
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4/25/2024 10:00:29 PM # 1.0.0.1119
RITTY, I have gone through all the seven poems mentioned. You have expressed you poetic thoughts through beautiful imagery of Nature and the garden! I had previously commented on four of them! Hope you liked my comments? With best wishes, -Raj