The Gathering Of Grays Poem by Jeffrey Philip Clegg

The Gathering Of Grays

Rating: 4.8


I stroll away
beneath the cobwebbed sky
having stolen your spirit
which implodes within me

I cannot leave behind
though
the shades of gray
that
when gathered together
blacken my soul
while I try to forget us
and the pain I caused.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Hermann 27 July 2005

Nicely written...elicits true emotion and uses not wasted words...efficient effective and meaningful, well done.-Rob

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Uriah Hamilton 27 July 2005

This is not the first time you spoke for my sad soul, I would say thanks, but I'm currently too sad.

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Dawn Mungovan 27 July 2005

Thinking I remember this one - from the picture right? Either way - it's a great poem! Dawn: o)

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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 27 July 2005

I enjoyed the craft that went into this. A very nice piece.

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