Helen Osbourne

The Gloaming

During the gloaming mother nature holds her breath.
She lowers her eyes and there is a eerie stillness much like that in a moment of silent prayer.
Night slides over her as her day is done.
Everything about her is now secret, hidden in the darkness just begun.

Topic(s) of this poem: sunset

Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 21, 2017

Form: Blank Verse


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Comments about The Gloaming by Helen Osbourne

  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (7/30/2018 8:45:00 AM)

    A refined poetic imagination, Helen O. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (10/23/2017 2:18:00 AM)

    Very happy to read and comment on ur poem nd gave u a big 10.
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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (10/23/2017 2:17:00 AM)

    there is a eerie stillness much like that in a moment of silent prayer.

    sunset, stillness, prayer, these wonderful moments of mother nature....... just a fine poem in little words u convey a lot........ thank u dear poetess. tony

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