The Golden Mheese Poem by Alex AAA

The Golden Mheese

Rating: 5.0


I stared into the abyss with my hate-filled eye,
My thirst for vengeance filling me with pride.
He stole my heart, he stole her twice,
If I were not wary he'd have stolen her thrice.
The cow-like man ran down with the goose,
That freaking unbelievable, slippery moose.
I don't understand why he did it so,
But because of his actions he is now my foe.
I speak of the three, the killers of geese,
The gold-cloaked heroes, the golden mheese.

Saturday, August 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,sad love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hey everyone, this poem was written on the 27th of December,2013, and was inspired by my love, Gabe, and his stunning glasses. It is rather symbolic and quite abstract, featuring many uses of metaphors. Some are structured within other symbolic meanings of other metaphors. With guest appearance, Ainsley, and his boiling hot chocolate, this poem has never failed me. To Gabe, forever in my heart - never to forget - episode three delayed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 August 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Alex.

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Mrs Hughes 16 August 2015

Truly a fantastic poem. If you take it away and really think about it, it develops a whole new meaning.

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Tara Johnson 16 August 2015

Within reasons. I like

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Kelly Kurt 15 August 2015

An interesting style and form. I hope to see more

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Thomas Kelly 15 August 2015

Oh man i cried like 5 times. Thanks to the author, he is a lyrical genius!

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