The Graveyard Poem by Takudzwa Thlomani

The Graveyard

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The air is still: Yet a thousand souls levitate erraticaly in an artmosphere charged with melancholy.

Dreams and aspirations concealed to the ground without being exhausted, Great minds layed to waste only to enrich the 'soil' with our knoweledge and secrets so that one day she can device a means to vanquish us all..

Monday, November 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: deaths,grave
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lungelo S Mbuyazi 30 November 2017

Dreams and aspirations concealed to the ground without being exhausted.....10+++ poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 November 2017

Nice one....Final place...10 Such are the imaginations And are warned in many of religious books We simply follow the religious dictates Our behavior is simply based on such things

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Takudzwa Thlomani 22 November 2017

I really appreciate your comment sir thank you

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Joshua Adeyemi 21 November 2017

Hmmm... It has often been said that: The wealthies place on earth is the graveyard. Cos they're some folks that weren't purposed while living on the earth who took their purpose to fertilize the earth. Grave is the place that sings not to the soul, nor cobble the sole but make life grows. Grave crave to cave many souls but life break his jaw often, yet, he wins often.

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Takudzwa Thlomani 22 November 2017

Wow your comment is poetry on its own, beautiful, thanks for commenting bro

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