The noisome breath of his unbridled hatred
wilts even the healthiest of Life's vines
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Interesting image conjured up by this piece of work, Ted. Love the imagery - reminds me of some of my old boyfriends! LOL! JK! Linda
Your imagery is outstanding. And of course, the metaphors: 'snakelike' is one that really stands out with no room for doubt as to its meaning. I have read this poem many times and enjoyed more with each read. Thanks for submitting this, a rose among many thorns. alicia