Sunday, June 14, 2009

The Invisible Man Comments

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four bare walls
erected like porcelain sculptures
shaping into a hollow room.
a lone chair sits.
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Kel Smith
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Allan Macli Borges 14 June 2009

it's a amazing thriller... as the man lose his last dropp of emotion he turns into another wall of the room... great poem indeed. keep it up! ! ! !

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Audrey Heller 14 June 2009

You have quite, an imagination! But this critique, is not, invisible. Your poem to say the least, was very interesting!

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