The Invisible Man Poem by Kel Smith

The Invisible Man



four bare walls
erected like porcelain sculptures
shaping into a hollow room.
a lone chair sits.

the gentle breeze
tumbles across the invisible mans face,
emotionless, unattached, empty
like the room.

Walls, once splashed in pale yellow, dancing
now barren and white.
He leans out the window
to catch the August rain.

Autumn arrives,
the orange sun sets,
a beaming beacon in the window.
still, the invisible man sits.

the panes of glass
chime sweetly in the wind
tolling the passing of time
as distant thunder rumbles.

teardrops stain his face
falling heavily like the rain,
silently breaking apart
they land in the windowsill

he shifts back to his chair
body trembling, he lowers himself
in a gesture, the tears are gone
he becomes one of the walls

in a hollow room
a lone chair sits
an invisible man once stood
nobody knows what happened.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan Macli Borges 14 June 2009

it's a amazing thriller... as the man lose his last dropp of emotion he turns into another wall of the room... great poem indeed. keep it up! ! ! !

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Audrey Heller 14 June 2009

You have quite, an imagination! But this critique, is not, invisible. Your poem to say the least, was very interesting!

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