The Journey Of The Unknown Poem by Not Long Left

The Journey Of The Unknown

Rating: 5.0


And so it came:

From a distant,
unamed, untamed
land.
Where Animals,
knew nothing of man
Rose from the green,
gardens of unkown pleasure,
such beauty beyond all measure.

Came, on the back of the northen winds,
refused to take rest,
below,
beside the Indian springs,

Lent its colours to the drab sky,
shed its shackles up high.

Arrived with the rain,
seperated and spread,
over the parched carpet.

Consumed eveything in its path,
In one gentle breath.

And light finally came.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 03 March 2006

Vincey, I love the visuals here: the picture of beauty that you paint is just so rich and uplifting. Thanks for this write. I like your diversity in writing as well. By the way, 'Like the Last of the Soft Down of Youth' is on the second of its 3 day run on my wall at work. Warm regards and a score of 10 from Gina.

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Eddie Mitchell 08 February 2006

This poem has such expressive beauty. its really a great piece.

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