Wednesday, December 2, 2015

The Kindergarten Concert Comments

Rating: 5.0

The kindergarten concert was an interesting show.
Peter walked onto the stage and yelled, "I have to go!"
Katie was embarrassed, but she had nowhere to hide.
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Robert Pottle
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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2015

I guess some times kids could be so brave and intelligent, and at other times they just couldn't help being kids. A good depiction of awful kindergarten concert, insightfully penned in lovely rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Robert. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 02 December 2015

I have attended many such concerts (I have 6 children, fully grown now) Your depiction is funny and accurate. Thanks, Robert

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Shakil Ahmed 02 December 2015

Beautiful presentation of kindergarten concert, well written, thanks for sharing

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Robert Pottle

Robert Pottle

Eastport, Maine
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