Sunday, June 8, 2008

The Land Comments

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The Land

He stood tall against the land
he called his home.
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 08 June 2008

This such a simple write in description only....for you leave the reader to choose who this man is.....I picture him as a proud Native American Indian looking out over the land....and I like were you ended it too....because it left me with a good feeling...how the land was taken away is a whole nother ugly story....simple but stunning: O)

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 June 2008

good poem..............

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