The Last Man Standing Poem by Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini

The Last Man Standing

Rating: 4.0


He came across, he turn back
Nobody watch his back
He is alone through that forest he walks without fear
He is a man without spear
He is able to say yes even it no, got one tear

No he is the man that stands behind his family
that protects his family, through anger he surrender
Those responses to offender
He surrenders to anger to avoid anger

To her his is a hero; to me his is the man of responsibilities
He count his words to his wife, he abandon all those bottles
He fight alone those battles.
Those bottles next to his friend are enemy to him.
That smokes seems to don't have place to him.

Working for only to go home and make his family happy.
Happy to have him in this world when it changes
When the volcanoes take place he will be the helicopter
When the lightning strikes he says ‘'don't worry I am here''.
Any sound as your head I will hear
Of Corse he is here to be the man, the protector
The survivor the one that God sent to this family
The one that never cry even if it bad but he pretend to be fine
He is the defender, the last man standing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Africa My Roots 31 October 2012

He came across, he turn back nobody watch his back He is alone through that forest he walks without fear He is able to say yes even it no No he is the man that stands behind his family That protects his family, through anger he surrender He surrenders to anger to avoid anger wow this is killing me

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Miss Darkness 06 June 2012

u have to work on the rhyme which is the end of each line there must be music in each poem any way it's gd that u're trying to express ur feelings by writing i personnaly started to write stuff like that and with time they became poems keep it up, the best of luck :))

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Yewande Adedokun 06 June 2012

its ok, very soon you will find d words of expression.just dont stop writing.

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