Friday, November 3, 2006

The Last Witch Comments

Rating: 5.0

As evening drew on into night
The rat, the cat, the bat and the owl
Left by the window that opened without a hand
To go about their business
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Scarlett Treat 03 November 2006

Some would think this was posted too late, after Halloween, that is, but I loved it, and have to agree with the skull. If we keep going the way we are, it won't be long! Great write from beginning to end!

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Frank Simon 03 November 2006

Marilyn, You held me spellbound from the begining all the way through! Great write. The skull summed it up as I feel also. Keep pushin' the pen, from what comes within. Frank p.s. (the line after broomstick you had a typo for the word then) Can't wait for the next one!

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Danny Reynolds 03 November 2006

Far too wise, to be a numb-skull! Nice one Marilyn. Danny

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