Tuesday, November 2, 2010

The Lemon Comments

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I pick a ripe yellow lemon from the tree,
the children, even the dog imitates me
and when I warn them to eat it up
the two boys draw up their lips
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Gert Strydom
tree Eating dog
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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

great write and well said...loved the story of labrador savouring lemons..great alliteration and allusion of words in poetry..well done Sir

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
Gert Strydom
Gert Strydom
Johannesburg, South Africa
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