The Life! ! ! Poem by angelica ayman

The Life! ! !

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there's nothing more important than the life
so nothing deserve that i cry
but everyone live it by his way, , , , , and that's what some people say:

'i don't think that i will die, , or
i have been created to cry, , , or
i don't talk to anyone and i'm always shy, , or
i will go here and there, , i don't care''

many people and many ways
but THIS IS THE LIFE!
thx for reading ***

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

It is a metaphysical poem where the concentration is on realistic force based on introspection. The poet turns thoughts into feeling – sensuous apprehension of thoughts with the involvement of wit and argumentation.Thank you for sharing, Angelica........10+++++++

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Omar Ibrahim 19 September 2009

i'm shy...haha...you expressed me in your poem....i don't talk only if someone talks to me....good poem angelica...10

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Obinna Eruchie 17 September 2009

We can live a life that is peaceful and loving in our own way, so that it will not be to our own detriment and of others as well. We have to free ourselves from doubt and sorrow, and have hope and joy by having faith. Interesting insight.

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Surya . 16 September 2009

sure.every one treats life in their own way.nice poem.touching too. voted10 surya

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