montana hohensee

Rookie (6/3/1993 / ohmaha NE)

The Lifes Cycle Of A Brave Heart - Poem by montana hohensee

a life so happy
a life so steady
a life so full
a life so loved
a life that was so bright with light
that no dark speck could be saught
that no demon could touch
or could even fathom
because he knows he could never have a life like yours
your hope is strong
your heart is bold
you go through day by day
by morning by morning
you touch hearts at every glace
you give men hope
when there is none that could be found
you give meaning for life
every glance
every breath
gives more life in the air
you are life
love
you are love
but soon the cycle will be reversed
and nothing can prevent that
soon
very soon
darkness will claim your soul
your light is running out
soon you will die
and soon you will take deaths place


Comments about The Lifes Cycle Of A Brave Heart by montana hohensee

  • (4/8/2008 2:30:00 AM)


    I yearn to have a life and love like this- of course that will not die! (Report) Reply

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  • (4/7/2008 5:49:00 PM)


    Hi Montana,

    I have to laugh because I see that there are those that would change the title here if they could. LOL. But what you have written here fits the title very well. There are spelling errors throughout the poem, but they did not stop from reading this like it was written. Just go through it again, slowly, and check the spelling. I know how these things can happen, cause I write in ahurry, then get a lot of comments that say correct this or that. LOL. Sometimes I have to edit and reedit before I fianlly post something, but I still post whatever with errors, LOL.

    You have written a very good poetic piece for your friend. This is very heartfelt and soulful, and the imagery of lighting up people's faces with just a (glace? I think this should be 'glance') , is just beautiful.

    And it doesn't matter how old you are on the calendar, it matters how old you are in your mind. If you have the wisdom of a 20 year old, that is great. Here is Australia movies rated M for mature audiences are for 15 year olds and older. But not all mid-teens are mature, as we both know. But when you can get compliments that you have the mind of a 20 year old, then girlfriend you have actually gained a lot.

    Thank you for sharing this poem with us, and I will be reading more.

    Love & hugs,
    Barbara
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  • (3/31/2008 11:43:00 PM)


    Hi Montana! A powerful write poignant and captive! *10*! !
    A Life's Cycle, could be a title could fit for a title!
    Best regards! Friend Thad
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  • (3/31/2008 10:56:00 PM)


    Title suggestions: A Life So Loved, from your poem would be my first pick. Next thought might be: Brave Heart

    Hope you find the satisfying one. It can be a challenge at times. H
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 31, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, April 13, 2009


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