The Light (Part 1) Poem by Daved Tril

The Light (Part 1)



As the dark draws away from the noise
i can see the light cowering in the corner
wondering what to do
planning his next move
contemplating every option
he doesn't want to make a mistake
he's been making them his whole life
but he doesn't know what path to take
and it seems like people have just given up on him
lonely
cold confused
what happens now?
people actually cared what bi did sometimes,
sometime,
feels like life times ago now
an unforgiven mess the light has dimmed to
has damned too
my bright boy
my beaming boy
why aren't you lit up anymore?
no answer
no need
just lost along the road
quitting in the dark
THE NOISE
it's to loud
i can't even hear myself think anymore
the clouds have formed over my tired eyes
and the dark is taking control
show me who i am
show me who i'm supposed to be
show me the end...
what happens when the light burns out?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rick Adriolo 12 February 2012

very good and stong poem.. After the first 2 lines you just have to read the rest.. Good writing!

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