Sunday, February 12, 2012

The Light (Part 1) Comments

Rating: ★5.0

As the dark draws away from the noise
i can see the light cowering in the corner
wondering what to do
planning his next move
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Rick Adriolo 12 February 2012

very good and stong poem.. After the first 2 lines you just have to read the rest.. Good writing!

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